Little Maid Girl II

The lines are great, some spots could be reduced (that thick line on the cheek/neck). I know what it's there for but it just isn't working right. I think it could be because of the over pooched cheek giving weird proportional changes to the shadow.

Something is a little off there though!

I enjoy the plate and the stuff on the plate; however, I do believe a sake bottle with a bowl +chopsticks would suit this better.. or perhaps a bottle of milk along with the bowl+spoon.

Due to the thickness in lines of her tail at the end being thicker rather than thinner, the fluffiness that you've tried giving the tail has been reduced quite a bit.

I do love this one over the original one, this one really is improved, the hands look very good, legs, and posture. Everything is correct but that cheek and some of the thickness of the lines (specifically the tail and back of her uniform should be thin I think) the end of the tail on the bottom side should be thin, the tip of the tail itself should be partially thin..

But I do like this <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> seriously do!


I was gonna say the nose looks a little big but now that I look and think about it.. it's just partial irregularities of the cheek..

Fix those things and to me it's full on stars for this <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>